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My father had left our house in the midst of a fight, between Lindsey and my mother. My mother was trying to get Lindsey to go with her to the Y to swim. Without thinking Lindsey had blared, "I'd rather die!", at the top of her lungs. My father watched as my mother froze then, burst fleeing to their bedroom to wail behind the door. He quietly tucked his notebook in his jacket pocket took the car keys off the hook, by the back door, and snuck out.

Literary elements

Satire- a literary work holding up human vices and follies to ridicule of scorn

Irony-the use of words to express something other than and esp. the opposite of the literal meaning

Analogy-inference that if two or more things agree with one another in some respect they will prob. agree in other

Foreshadowing-to represent indicate or typify beforehand

Figurative Language

Figurative-representing by a figure or resemblance.

Figure of speech-a form of expiration used to convey meaning or hitting speech.

Imagery-existing only in the imagination.

Trope- the use of a word in a figurative way

They all mean the same thing. You are not telling the exact truth but it makes it more intreating.

Story Spinners:Option 3

As I regained consciousness, I remember asking where am I and what happened to me. Those questions were quietly answered by my friends that had just found me. All that i could remember about what had happened to me was headlights coming at me then everything went black. All my friends were very worried about me they said that I needed to go to the hospital I continued telling them that I was fine they continued to say don't be stubborn. I soon realized that I wasn't fine I could burly stand up on my own.

I know that there was no way that I was going to be able to ride at the rodeo that weekend if I didn't go to the hospital so I told my friends to take me but. I didn't remember much of the car ride I was hurting so bad that I was fainting a lot. I remember entering the vestibule in the front of the hospital but after that I don't really know what happened. When I woke up the doctors were trying to find out what was going on and what happened to me. All of my friends were blaming themselves for not being with me when I got hit by the car. It was no ones fault the car came up on the sidewalk.

When the car hit me it sent me flying I landed in the ally and that's where my friends found me. There were so many people around when the car hit me. No one saw where i landed so everyone thought that maybe they had just thought that they had seen a person standing there but they didn't see anyone now so they continued on with there lives. when i came out of surgery the cops where wanting to talk to me they had found the guy that had hit me he felt bad now but at the time he didn't care.